Intento de canción

Quizás mi inglés está mal (obvio xD) y la letra un poco confusa. Pero como en este pais copian todo hasta lo malo (wikipedia) entonces no dudaré en pensar que esto saldra como canción en un grupo amateur de rock progresivo o algo así de aqui a un año xD

Saludos jovenes lectores.

(No tengo titulo, no se me ocurrió)

I’m walking in a strange way…
that feel me like a little boy that not think in nothing
but I try walk with you
and I disappear with you voice…
so noise, so dark, so mad.

But…
Maybe I think that you follow me
‘cause I cry in you soul
and the world pay us
the pain of my fears
I don’t know if you trust me
but is the solution of this madness
and will see the future that wait us.

Really this is beautiful nightmare
with a symphony that touch my soul
and you waiting me as freeze sorrow
that mist my sacrilege escape
of this terrible caos.

But…
Maybe I think that you follow me
‘cause I cry in you soul
and the world pay us
the pain of my fears
I don’t know if you trust me
but is the solution of this madness
and will see the future that wait us.

I try,
I fight, but this nightmare killing me...!!!
Maybe I trust in you sentimental weapon
and fight with this fucking madness that
crucifice this world
but I wait the sweety death…
and my soul will go in you.